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I attempt poetry - Fail

Post by Allianzerine on Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:34 pm

A day. A hot, summer day. The target, in the bay, sitting at about a mile away.
At that day, that hot, summer day, I could not even hear the wind sway. Away, making a difficult way, my bullet made the wind sway. The wind sway, as the bullet drops towards the bay. I moved my mildots away, to overlook the bay, and that day, that hot, summer day, the target went away.


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Re: I attempt poetry - Fail

Post by Ariel on Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:39 pm

O.o makes me think of snipers.

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Re: I attempt poetry - Fail

Post by Allianzerine on Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:47 pm

Ariel wrote:O.o makes me think of snipers.


It is about snipers. :3

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Re: I attempt poetry - Fail

Post by besterich27 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:01 am

Totally loved it Razz It would be a perfect signature for a Ex Marine Sniper Razz

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Post by Akane_Shine on Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:26 pm

It paints a nice picture- keep at it. If you had a nice hook in there I would totally adopt it as my sig with credits to yourself.

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