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Post by Matt Mercer on Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:31 am

State of the Union

The Start





Report: Eyes only
Iraq December 13th 2006 0600: operation Sublime. Tracking WMD location, Sniper team Zulu: 1st Assult Division, Team Echo:

Operation status: Failed

Officer in charge Gordon F, Mendez:


Status List :(Killed in action)
First lieutanant: Gordon F, Mendez: (1st Division assult, Team Echo)
Private: Frank W, McToll: (1st Division assult, Team Echo)
Private 1st class: Jason J, Fredricks: (1st Division assult, Team Echo)
1st Sergent: Kayla S, Meguire: (1st Division assult, Team Echo)
Corporal: Kyle Luhrs: (Sniper Team Zulu, Operation Overwatch)

Status List (Missing in action)

Corporal Jake, W Luhrs (Sniper Team Zulu, Operation Overwatch)

Iraq January 5th 2007 0900:
Subject: Military investigation:
Suspect in question: Jake W, Luhrs: sniper team Zulu.
Location: Classified
Reason(s)
Found In military Outpost, south of Operation Location. Date: january 3rd 2009 01700:
-Desertion
Investigation Status [On going]

*camera Cuts to a small Room with two figures One tied to a chair (Jake) the other standing over him*

Interigator: You deserted your post. Five Soliders Dead. What do you have to say for yourself Corporal?

Jake* I didn't abandon my post, I followed Orders and my orders were to Evacuate the area and head back to -

Interigator grabs Jake's throat

Interigator: Who gave you those orders Corporal? I want their name. Who ever they are made a mess of this operation. I want names! I want to know why you Left your post, when you were suppose to be covering that squad.

*Interigator releases his grip on Jake's Throat*

Jake: (cough)(Cough) I Called it in after Lieutanant Mendez prodcasted that the sight Clean if WMD's. He ordered all Squads to Evac back to (Base Name Disclosed). I was Furthest from the Sight. I was to overwatch the first portion of the operation and provide covering for Mendez and his Squad.

Interigator punches jake in the nose*

Interigator: Your a Disgrace to your country. Framing your commanding officer, Who is now dead Because of an enemy ambush . On which you were suppose to warn him corporal! You frame a dead man and have the nerve to retreat as your squad is being cut down by insurgents fire.

Jake* I know that! my brother was killed! But I had left the premis and was out of earshot of any shooting that happend. If I would have known I would have gone back! It was my Brother for Fucks sake! Do you really think I would leave him to Die?!?

Interigator: Sure looks that way son! You have the death of five soliders, One of them your brother on your hands. Altough we can't proove Mendez did give that order. You abandoned your post early. For that you are being Discharged and sent back Stateside without pay. Along with your brother in a box. Effective immidiatly.

Jake: No! No you can't do that! I lost everything here! you can't take this away from me!

*camera cuts as the interigator walks out of the room*


Present day

Jake Luhrs is now living in palmino, Sickend with the amount of Crime in this town. and saddend that he is here alone, a long way from home and what family he has left. He has found employment at a Steel forgery and works part time with a gunsmith in Los Santos. Barley making ends meet he lives in the palmino Creek motel. one day after an exhausting day at work. Jake is on his way home when he is pulled into an alley at gunpoint and robbed. He is then beaten by three armed men and left to die. Before he passes out he remembers the faces of the men. A few days later Jake scraped together what money he had and purchased a A Semi-auto Cheytac M200 Sniper rifle from an outside Gun dealer. He tracked the Gangsters who had Robbed and beaton him and waited Patiently to strike and bring them down one by one. As he saw the faces of each of the men in his sniper scope. He realized that what he is doing is just a nail in the coffin. This town was filled with Lowlifes and murderers. As he pulled the trigger of his gun on each of the men he swore to serve and protect not for his country. but for the people in it.


What is SOU:
State of the union is a malitia thats purpose is to crackdown on crime in palmino. They essentially are Helping the police in secret. But are armed (or will be) to take on just about any crime in palmino. We do not affiliate with the Authorities. We do not work or interact with them. To them we are just another gang. But we continue doing what we do.Super natural in the town is neutral. We do not mess with them unless they are spotted breaking the law.

What SOU is NOT

We work in secret we are not another Police force. We are citizens taking matters into our own hands, For ourselves and those who can't defend themselves. We are suppose to deal with the problem Then dissapear and let the Police clean up the rest

Rules (IC)

-Listen your Comanding officer
-Never engage alone
-Respect Higher ranks
-Never engage a police officer
-Never Help a criminal
-No politics.
-No treason.
-If you are captured by authorities and are taken in, You have taken Temporary leave of SOU
-Do not interfear with a delt with situation.
-Never leave a trace.
-No super natural

Rules (OOC)
-Follow all server rules.
-Do not MG crimes
We don't want Rule breakers.
only accepting the best of Rp'ers as not to cause trouble.

Members
Jake Luhrs - Conduit


Ranks: (Highest to lowest.)

-Conduits (the most highly trained SOU agent controls all other Ranks)
-Officer (0/3)(High in ranks and trained very well, Takes orders directly from conduits)
-Lieutanants (skilled in combat, takes orders from Officers)
-Staff Sergents (skilled, In charge of training Recruits, takes orders from all higher ranks)
-Private (lowest rank not very skilled still in field training)
-Recruit (shows promise. Not yet in SOU)

Positions:

Specialist
-Knows a bit about every aspect of combat. (Highest ranks)(requires most gun stats filled IG)

Equipment





Sniper
- Knows how to handle a rifle and can in emergency situations fight in close quarters. Responsilbe for overwatch (higher ranks)(requires Rank 3 rifle IG)



Equipment

Disasembled M200 semi Automatic sniper

Silenced Pistol

SOU Mask



Undercover
-Knows how to Blend in and dissapear. Someone with great social skills and can call it in if anything happends (all ranks)

Silenced Pistol

Switchblade

SOU Mouth Mask



Infantry
-Knows how to handle the big guns. Masters at close quarters and hand to hand combat, (must have points in rifles IG)

Silent Assult rifle

Glock (semi auto)

SOU mask



Drivers
-Master driver, Must pickup or Evac. must know there way around a car and how to drive it. Also know basic knowledge of combat (will be tested)

-glock

-Modded vehicle (no license plate. Limo tint in side windows, 30% tint on front and back windows)






GUN DEALER needed. An individual that sells weapons exclusivly to us. Will be paid more then market price and will have security as another payment. We will buy very often.

-No criminal record

-Weapon license (2-3)

-Not employed in any factions



NOTE: Until we find a Suitible Weapons dealer, We only Use what we can Optain, If you have a weapons License you may use it as you wish. SO the above weapons are the Best case scenario. For right now We use Knifes and bats and whatever you can get with your license.

Equipment

Signature SOU mask

Jakes mask... Made in the steel forgery he works part time in ICly.




Primary (based off position)


Secondary (based off position)

Kevlar

Messenger bags.



(Weapons Purchased with license are allowed.)


Proceedure. Best case Scenario
Disarm
Disable
Call the authorities
Do not kill the suspect Unless you don't have a way out.
Pick up the your bullet casings
Keep your weapon Concealed.

Tactics
-Make it short and sweet. Find the perp Disarm And disable Call 911. Thats how we do things around here.
- Shoot to wound not to kill unless you have too
- Dissapear after you call 911.
-Wear your masks

Base/Hideout
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(THIS IS STILL A WORK IN PROGRESS UPDATES WILL BE MADE IF THE FACTION IS A SUCCESS. also tried my best with the fonts and colors.)


Application Template:
Code:
(If you pass you will be contacted by an officer or someone of higher rank and tested)

OOC portion
Name
Age
Years in SAMP
Time in VH-RP
Race
Level

IC portion

Name

Number

Picture

Age

Ethnicity

Sex

Military Training If any (describe):

Weapon license:

Past Jobs:

Political Veiws;

Specialty:

Rate your

Shooting X/10

Driving X/10

Swimming X/10

social skills X/10

Close quarter X/10

Hand to hand X/10

Character story (200 word minimum)
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Last edited by Matt Mercer on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:13 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : cleaned up Post edited classes and added info)
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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Raiden Akimoto on Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:07 am

Bleach mask and Element bag, epic. Can I join this as Raiden? DeRon!
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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Nero on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:15 am

You're SWAT... You really wanna leave?

Anyways, LOL at your signature.... Y I GET UGLY 1?!

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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by ArielV on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:24 am

Raiden, Y I NO GET 1?

Anyways, Send me the code for the topic and I'll fix your spelling mistakes, matt.

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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Max Woods on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:33 am

Why dont you just quote it. Anyways faction looks good. Good Luck.
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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by ArielV on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:39 am

Quoting it would make it harder to read at 3:39 in the morning,

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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Raiden Akimoto on Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:19 pm

Ariel Virai wrote:Quoting it would make it harder to read at 3:39 in the morning,

Works the same, just remove
I did it for BLC though. Also, I did not add you because I had never seen you ICly.
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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Jericho Phelps on Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:56 pm

Your spelling is.. Were you sleeping while you wrote this?

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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by DeRon Ellis on Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:58 pm

Honestly, this looks good. Only thing is, can you actually RP it. I'll be watching.

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Re: State of the Union (WIP)

Post by Matt Mercer on Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:12 pm

Honestly I was really jittery when i wrote this. Redbull and Coffee do not go together very well. But i did get my 10 page paper on the civil war done Very Happy. But yeah long story short I made alot of spelling errors, and don't know how to use the code thing very well. And Ariel....How do i do that??

P.S this will be edited. going to add ranks to member(s) and change the story a bit. Seems a bit rushed no? Then I plan on making updates to our weaponry (tone it down a bit) And adding new positions.... But i think that can wait until after the holidays. Happy holidays Everyone!

P.S.S No really ariel how do I send you the code?
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